Thursday, March 26, 2020
The abandoned train
Hi, I'm Tayla this is the writing that I did about an abandoned train. On the second slide is the story I write with the story starter. This task was fun and a little challenging.do you like writing stories? do you like scary stories
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Wow! I really like where you went with that story, a really good writer can link their introduction to their ending and that is exactly what you did! I think you used the 5 senses well, have you been learning that with Miss Smith? For your next piece of writing I would like to see capital letters used at the beginning of all of your sentences. Keep up the great work Tayla!
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