Friday, March 27, 2020
A peaceful life
Hi, I'm Tayla and this is the reading work that I did. On the second slide is a story I wrote with the story starter. this task was fun and hard. would you like to live in the middle of the ocean?
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That is incredibly descriptive Tayla, you have great use of the 5 senses. I like how you take us into Ben's mind to show us what he is thinking. What did you find hard about the task?
ReplyDeleteWell done Tayla, I love your use of descriptive words. Also a huge well done with your blog presentation. I am loving the way that you are following the Think 6 model. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteWow Tayla, I felt like I was inside your story, the peace and quiet away from the hectic life and pace in the city! This was clever and thought provoking with descriptive language! I'm not sure if I'd like to live in the middle of the ocean but i love the sound of a peaceful life, ka pai!
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