Hi, I'm Tayla and this is my story that I write about a pony.in my story, I had to include at least three of the following a pony, baseball cap, a lamp, a banana, and a movie theater. I included all of them.
do you like writing?
do you like ponies?
Wednesday, April 15, 2020
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Hi Tayla,
ReplyDeleteWow a pony that could drive a car - how crazy! Think about using your 5 senses when you complete your writing to give the story more detail. Keep up the great work.
Hi Tayla, that is really creative. I liked how she stopped and had a bite of the stranger's burger. It would be a good idea to think about how you begin each sentence. Most of your sentences start with 'she'. Try and mix it up a bit.
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